Promotional Statement Reflection

Upon reflection from my peers and teacher regarding my Promotional Statement I have gone through what has been said and revised my initial work to improve it to the best of my abilities. To do this I started with changing my Background from the kitchen environment to a plain wall as this vastly changes the atmosphere into a professional one. I also kept the dogs out of the room so no interference was clearly visible. Working on the statement itself rather than location, I started with incorporating an introductory sentence saying my name and what I am studying. This makes the entire statement feel less rushed. I also improved on my hesitation/stuttering and diction just to make sure that the video was completely fluent and coherent to the viewer. I believe all these factors have greatly improved the presentation of my promotional statement making it a much more professional and watchable viewing experience for potential employers/casting directors.